January 15, 2017
The Talaska family enters a contest to have their ramshackle house made over by a crew of amusement-park clowns. What could go wrong?Somehow this sequel to Prizewinners of Piedmont Place (2016) never really ignites, despite heaps of seemingly surefire comic gold. These morsels include an exploding washing machine and an entire house refitted with trap doors and other thrills...not to mention repeated appearances by the wildly frantic Funland Clown Patrol. Having found their true calling as a clan of competition winners, the Talaskas confidently tackle the Funland Fun House Makeover Contest--which requires gathering over 1,000 "likes" in two days from the neighbors and then finding a treasure hidden in the sponsoring amusement park. Being built around a laughing, loving, mixed-race family with complementary talents, the tale has a strong foundation. But the plot is just a series of loosely connected set pieces with a mishandled climax (the Talaskas find the "treasure" immediately, then take days to realize it despite obvious clues) and a happy ending engineered deus ex machina-style by a late-arriving surprise ally. The clowns and rest of the supporting cast likewise come off more as props than people. Finished illustrations not seen. The opener offers hope that Doyle can do better than this forced effort to capitalize on a solid premise and main cast. (Fiction. 10-13)
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March 1, 2017
Gr 3-6-In this second book in the series, the Talaskas are competing for a new prize: their own beloved home. Eleven-year-old Cal and his quirky family won their last contest, the Great Grab, despite overwhelming odds. While the family members possess unique idiosyncrasies, their love for one another brings them together to accomplish the near impossible. When the family abode begins to fall apart, literally, Cal convinces the Talaskas to enter a new contest, Escape from Funland, where the first prize is a home makeover. He thinks that the contest is in the bag until the whole town gets wind of the prize; now it's a race to see who can garner the most "Likes" and ultimately get to compete for a new house. Filled with rollicking, fast-paced action; dramatic twists; and a lot of clowns, this story will keep readers entertained right from the start. Despite some predictable plotlines and a rushed conclusion, the narrative will amuse fans of the first book and readers new to the series. VERDICT A laugh-out-loud adventure, ideal for large middle grade collections.-Carol Connor, Cincinnati Public Schools, OH
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July 1, 2017
The biracial Talaska family (The Prizewinners of Piedmont Place) works together to solve riddles to win the "Funland Fun House Makeover Contest" and save the dilapidated family home. Although lacking in character and plot development, slapstick humor and pun-tastic wordplay are at the heart of this imaginative book filled with clowns, amusement-park attractions, and last-minute saves. Spot illustrations echo the over-the-top tone.
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